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Joined: 4/9/2010 Posts: 658 Location: West Bend, Wisconsin
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Master Fisto
Faction:Republic Cost:61
HP: 140 Def:21 Attack:13 Damage 20
Special abilities
Unique Melee attack Triple Attack Shii-cho style mastery( +4 attack, and +4 defense, if 2 or more enemies are within 6 squares. This character gets an additional +1 attack and +1 defense for every other enemy within 6 squares.) Jar-Kai Experience( when hit by a melee attack, make a save of 16, on a success, this character takes no damage and may make an immediate attack against the attacker.)
Force Powers, Force 2, Force Renewal 1
Master Speed Lightsaber Defense Surprise Move Lightsaber Sweep Master of the force 2
Opinions anyone?
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Rank: Advanced Bloo Milk Member Groups: Member
Joined: 3/27/2008 Posts: 229
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If you're open to a bit of constructive criticism:
- When costing a piece, especially one in the Republic faction, try and think of what CE's this character will be subject to. As it stands right now, you have a 47 pt piece with 140 HP that can have a base 24 def in a squad with Yoda GM, or 25 in a squad with GOWK. On top of that, he can gain 6 more defense under the right circumstances, boosting his def to 30 or 31. And that's just to start.
- Triple Attack, whether one likes it or not, is costed fairly high. Compare to Bastila Shan, Darth Maul, Sith Apprentice and Kyle Katarn, JBM to see what a mini in that price range has to give up to remain balanced... ish.
- Force Renewal and MOTF 2 on Republic Jedi seems to come at the cost of stats, abilities or Force Powers. Your Kit has a plethora of each and very few weaknesses.
Overall, while I like the basic premise of what you have here, your Kit is at least 20 points under-costed or so.
If you're shooting for the 47 pt range, you'll want to make changes to balance things out a bit.
Also, Shii-Cho Style Mastery seems a bit over the top. A natural evolution of Shii-Cho Style might be more like: (+4 Attack and +4 Defense if 1 or more enemies are within 6 squares)
Suggestions for keeping him around 47 points:
Master Fisto 47 Points
Republic HP: 130 Def:20 Atk:13 Dam: 20
Special Abilities Unique; Melee Attack; Double Attack; Shii-Cho Style Mastery( +4 Attack and +4 Defense if 1 or more enemies are within 6 squares.) Jar-Kai Experience( when hit by a melee attack, make a save of 16, on a success, this character takes no damage and may make an immediate attack against the attacker.)
Force Powers Force 2. Force Renewal 1 Master Speed Lightsaber Defense Surprise Move Lightsaber Sweep Master of the force 2
Now, you can get Rolling Cleave from Commander Ahsoka if you really want it and this piece is comparable to Shaak Ti, JM in terms of costing aggressiveness.
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Rank: Advanced Bloo Milk Member Groups: Member
Joined: 4/9/2010 Posts: 658 Location: West Bend, Wisconsin
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He is a little undercosted, I'll change a few things.
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Rank: Advanced Bloo Milk Member Groups: Member
Joined: 12/26/2008 Posts: 1,233
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he is undercosted, but i think he should keep triple, because every jedi ends up with double usually. One thing you might think for Shii- cho is (+4 attack and +4 defense if 2 or more enemies are within 6. This character gains an additional +1 attack and +1 defense for each additional character above 2) that way you could get your +6's but it would be a little more situational. And being that he is a follower in the faction with GOWK it wouldn't be an auto +10's. i Think he would be about right at that point. IF you wanted to you could switch Surprise Move for Intuition, But that would be up to you. i Think he would be about 67. i Do like him, im just giving some constructive Criticism.
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Rank: Advanced Bloo Milk Member Groups: Member
Joined: 4/9/2010 Posts: 658 Location: West Bend, Wisconsin
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I edited Shii-cho style mastery again. Is it okay now?
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Rank: Advanced Bloo Milk Member Groups: Member
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i like it. You did a good job. TO be exact i like most of the customs you have been doing. Keep up the good work.
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Rank: Advanced Bloo Milk Member Groups: Member
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countrydude82487 wrote:i like it. You did a good job. TO be exact i like most of the customs you have been doing. Keep up the good work. Thanks Countrydude82487
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Rank: Advanced Bloo Milk Member Groups: Member
Joined: 3/27/2008 Posts: 229
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Much better. Only thing that sticks out is Shii-Cho Style Mastery- it's a bit... convoluted. Take another look and try to simplify it a bit. It can have more depth, but needs to be a bit more logical.
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Rank: Advanced Bloo Milk Member Groups: Member
Joined: 4/9/2010 Posts: 658 Location: West Bend, Wisconsin
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Okay, I changed the wording. It was kind of hard for me to describe at first.
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