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CCC Week 14 Grievous Fringe Options
Deathwielded
Posted: Tuesday, October 22, 2013 1:41:18 PM
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Here are the Rules:
1. The character must be cannon and from the chosen faction. They can have affinity, but the character must start in the chosen faction.
2. You may update any existing versions you already have and/or create a new one. You may update/create several versions of the character but you must ultimately select 1 you wish to run with. (this must be done by the schedule below)
3. Place a hyperlink in this forum to make it easier to find your character. You can just post the stats or image here but if changes are needed it would be easier (and save space) if you just used a Hyperlink (If you don't know how to post Hyperlinks in a forum setting please ask and we will help you. It's not hardLaugh )
4. Please rate the characters in this contest, however don't be so base as to 1 bomb the other characters in this contest. This is a friendly contest, just have fun, be honest and do your best.
5. Voting will look like this: "I rated so-and-so(A) an 8, so-and-so(B) an 9, and so-and-so(C) a 7. My vote goes to so-and-so(B). (this vote counts as 1 point) Please feel free to comment on why you made your choice, (what you liked) or not and just put your scores.
6. Too make things fair you must vote in order to win the contest. You must vote for all characters entered in the contest and you may not rate or vote for your own character.
7. The character that is rated the highest in the Bloo Milk rating system will receive a bonus of 2 points. The winner will be decided by how many points they receive (for example: so-and-so(B) received 3 individual votes and received the bonus 2 for being the highest rated character for a total of 5 points)
8. you may not change or update the entered character AFTER the deadline (from Tuesday-Thursday you may get advice and change your character accordingly) Friday at midnight before any votes are casted is the deadline.

The schedule will be like this: Monday the winner of last weeks CCC will announce his choice for the character (including his faction), from Tuesday till Friday characters can be created/updated but on Friday you must have picked one character to submit. Then voting will be held on Saturday, Sunday and Monday until 4, Monday night the winner will be announced and the next character picked.
markedman247
Posted: Tuesday, October 22, 2013 1:57:23 PM
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Due to travels, I'll be passing on this and the next. This one sounds interesting.
pegolego
Posted: Tuesday, October 22, 2013 2:53:42 PM
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I haven't made my Fringe Grievous yet myself; I've been waiting until I got to pick the contest next to pick it, and putting it off until then. Here goes!
pegolego
Posted: Tuesday, October 22, 2013 3:35:49 PM
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Here 'tis! http://www.bloomilk.com/Custom/15774/qymaen-jai-sheelal--grievous

The CE is useless until I design some of Grievous' Elite (there is much more info on pre-suit Grievous and his Elite since last time I read his wikia, but I had wanted to for a while).

This custom represents many fazes of Qymaen's past; From him leading his Elite against the Huk, to him grief-stricken and overpowering after his beloved's death. I hope you guys like it!
CorranHornsux123
Posted: Tuesday, October 22, 2013 3:41:20 PM
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hey buddy u wanna make ur gervious public instead of private haha
pegolego
Posted: Tuesday, October 22, 2013 3:42:32 PM
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CorranHornsux123 wrote:
hey buddy u wanna make ur gervious public instead of private haha


But I care too much about him Razz

My... PRECIOUSSSS!

And, it's Qymaen to you Flapper
CorranHornsux123
Posted: Tuesday, October 22, 2013 3:43:36 PM
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:P but i cant pull him up on my screen lol because hes set to private lol
pegolego
Posted: Tuesday, October 22, 2013 3:46:20 PM
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How about now? BlooMilk
Lord_Ball
Posted: Tuesday, October 22, 2013 5:04:18 PM
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CerousMutor
Posted: Wednesday, October 23, 2013 11:17:17 AM
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Grievous, IGBC Enforcer


A Fringe Droid booster, who can hold his own.
Deathwielded
Posted: Thursday, October 24, 2013 6:41:57 PM
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Deathwielded
Posted: Friday, October 25, 2013 6:22:51 AM
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Tonight is the deadline to have your character entered!
pegolego
Posted: Friday, October 25, 2013 10:27:04 AM
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Not many entries this week Scared
pegolego
Posted: Saturday, October 26, 2013 4:04:53 AM
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4 entries... Scared

Ah, well... I tried to get Grievous some love!

Voting begins today! BlooMilk
pegolego
Posted: Saturday, October 26, 2013 4:14:24 AM
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Here go my 3 ratings for today! Also, I'd like to thank everyone who attempted to represent the obscure-ish past of this character (if only to make me feel good about myself!) ThumpUp

Qymaen jai Sheelal, Demigod (Lord Ball) 9
I like all of the abilities you chose. CE seems good. This doesn't seem like Qymaen slaying LOTS of Huk, but he'll sure put a hurt on at least one at a time. Deadly shooter! Nice overall job with this character.

Grievous, Banking Clan Enforcer (CerousMutor) 8
Good representation of our brother Grievous as the Sep Enforcer. Triple with basically disintegration and some of the other abilities on him are DEADLY. I love the affinity, but I think Command Override might be a bit too powerful (can't think of any bad synergy examples right off hand, but it could be a problem). Notoriety could have an issue getting much use, I think it would have been a nicer touch on a piece like Grievous himself, rather than in his CE (I love the SA idea by itself; I had thought of something like it but not had the chance to use it yet).

Grievous, Brilliant Tactician (Deathwielded) 9 BlooMilk
You got the Tactician across. The CE is a nice touch in many factions (hopefully not TOO nice; I don't think it should be), and he packs quite a punch with GMA/Accurate/Double/potential Merciless +20. More of the 'Tactician' is present in Intimidation and Pathfinder, very ally-oriented abilities on him. A nice Grievous!

Deathwielded gets my vote! BlooMilk
Lord_Ball
Posted: Saturday, October 26, 2013 7:55:03 AM
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pegolego, Grievous: 8.5
A powerhouse for sure Accurate Furious Assassin shots might be a bit overpowered, even with the semi-low attack.

CerousMutor, Banking Clan Enforcer: 9
Fairly well balanced thanks to that low attack and limited defenses consider how powerful the combo of Accurate, Triple, Sniper Rifle, Flurry + can gain Twin is. Accurate, Sniper Rifle +Flurry is particularly devastating since not only do you get an autokill, but another attack to boot - kind of like a ranged Cleave, Good Show!

Deathwielded, Brilliant Tactician: 8.75
Versatility is definitely an interesting ability on this approach, it does kinda force him into a Separatist Squad, but he also offers enough to be useful without the use of it so it mostly feels tacked on. That said it is a nice way to get the outdated separatist Grevious' GMA, making this one difficult to get a good opinion of without actually playing him.

Cerous gets my vote


pegolego wrote:


Qymaen jai Sheelal, Demigod (Lord Ball) BlooMilk
I like all of the abilities you chose. CE seems good. This doesn't seem like Qymaen slaying LOTS of Huk, but he'll sure put a hurt on at least one at a time. Deadly shooter! Nice overall job with this character.

well he's Demigod so he has already slain them... yeah that's it! I should have probably added Double Attack, oh well I'll edit it after the next one starts.
Deathwielded
Posted: Sunday, October 27, 2013 4:44:02 PM
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CerousMutor's Grievous, Banking Clan Enforcer Sniper-Rifle sound cool, though I would've dropped the last bit that works like disintegration. ( I understand it probably represents headshots) though with all the limitations I would say that it is balanced. Affinity could probably drop "Medium or smaller". I'm not a fan of Command Override, Notoriety is interesting though I think it could work for Non-uniques instead of just droids. Combat Instructor gives great benefits though I wish there was a better (more specific) name for it, it give the MagnaGuards the perfect boost! This guy would be overpowered in a fringe only squad. Triple/Twin with Accurate, +4 attack and +10 damage, Talans CE (intuition like effect) all without counting Sniper Rifles' effect. Though the above is slightly balanced out by the fact he is an easy 44 point kill. This guy is definitely a CIS and Fringe boost mainly. 8
pegolego's Qymaen jai Sheelal, Grievous Impulsive Overwhelming Power is good (don't kill his unique ally!) Jedi Hatred +10 since he hated the Jedi, but wasn't quite a Jedi hunter yet. Assassin... Eh. Good to see someone else represent his tactical skills.ThumbsUp Furious Assault definitely represents him killing mass amounts of Huk! The CE is useless and probably would remain so if he was ever a V-set piece. The name is perfect. Very dangerous, maybe too dangerous if combined with Mith'rawn'do with upto +17 attack and 60 damage! (living Jedi that is activated? Easy enough) against everyone he can shoot after moving 12? Throw in OP and he is killer good! Good thing he costs so much and has a CE otherwise he would be broken! (thank Goodness he can't gain twin!) 8.5
Lord_Ball's Qymaen jai Sheelal, Demigod Slugthrower fits as a SA name for him, though since Slugs (bullets) could be blocked by lightsabers I'm not a fan of it. It is good to give him something impulsive though I'm not sure about Impulsive Advance... Careful Shot +6 and Accurate represent his Sniper skills well. The CE seems really underwhelming...Cool sub name, though I wish he inspired more fear, he reminds me of Anakin Skywalker, Chosen One, the name suggests something stronger than what is found. I do think he needs Double attack to be usable. 8

I never read the source materiel for Grievous' past (except for how he became a cyborg) so I'm not as familiar with the character as I would like. That being said, I don't any versions that wow me (without being overpowered) thus my lower than normal ratings (especially for the one I vote for!) My final Vote is for Pegolego's version
Deathwielded
Posted: Sunday, October 27, 2013 4:48:02 PM
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pegolego wrote:
4 entries... Scared

Ah, well... I tried to get Grievous some love!

Voting begins today! BlooMilk

Yeah you did try. Unfortunately since his past isn't quite well known that probably hurt his chances at stardom.
Lord_Ball
Posted: Monday, October 28, 2013 4:17:49 AM
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Deathwielded wrote:
Lord_Ball's Qymaen jai Sheelal, Demigod Slugthrower fits as a SA name for him, though since Slugs (bullets) could be blocked by lightsabers I'm not a fan of it. It is good to give him something impulsive though I'm not sure about Impulsive Advance... Careful Shot +6 and Accurate represent his Sniper skills well. The CE seems really underwhelming...Cool sub name, though I wish he inspired more fear, he reminds me of Anakin Skywalker, Chosen One, the name suggests something stronger than what is found. I do think he needs Double attack to be usable. 8


Impulsive Advance is an abstraction of him increasing his push against the enemy, causing them to flee then advancing the battle to the yam'rii homeworld.
pegolego
Posted: Monday, October 28, 2013 5:29:29 AM
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^I think it fits well. I considered STRONGLY adding IA when I made mine, but went with IOP instead.
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